Your an awesome inker and your backgrounds kick some major ass. Your style overall is just to die for.
My only complaint, and I refrain from saying this because I like your work so much, is that this is really hard to read. I had to read it 5 times to really understand what is going on. This may be because I have a hard time reading comics unless they are 100% clear, but I just feel that if you are going to use complicated inking styles than the layout should be simple. That way they both balance. Otherwise, it can be confusing.